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December 01, 2011

~ gone are those days ~


It’s been so long since I penned a poem and my poetic muse was almost dying because of my continuous fiction writing. Even my close blogging friends advised me to concentrate a little on my poetic muse too but I was unable to find any inspiration, but today when I read few prompt lines, I decided to express the feelings of a woman whom I met last week in a party. She was completely drunk and she shared her inside feelings about her hubby, and his previous relationships, but she was very positive that someday her hubby would love her completely. And as the quote says, "Even if you fall on your face, you're still moving forward." - Victor Kiam, she was positive, but her tear-filled yearning eyes have given me the inspiration to pen this poem.




Gone are those sentimental, emotional romantic days,
Passionate, engaged and beautiful good-looking girls;

Fell in love with him madly, heartily, deeply and truly,
But entertainment and amusements was love for him sadly;

Preference was given to glistening flesh instead of soul,
Four-letter word was a cover for the flesh-eating animal;

Love, sex, break-up and love again was his mantra forever,
Longing for Love, girls do all for this animal, but do ever;

He loved, or just for the fun, he was making love with angels,
And lived alone in life, tasting flesh until I became his smiles;

Am I his destiny or just because he needs a partner, I am?
Confused... but gone are those days when he was young; calm,

I said to myself, beautiful life is a dream for a guy and girl for long,
Though the dream may fail but I should be ready to face all along;

Life of a playboy’s wife is not easy to live as we read, but I pray,
Gone are those days he never needed anyone, and his prey pray,

Time can change things, and he will love me, only me, ever and forever,
Gone are those stupid, non-sense, and worst days of his life ever.



I am sharing this post with Carry on Tuesday #133, It's Thursday #82, ABC Wednesday 'T' for Time, Theme Thursday Inside. I heartily thank them for the inspirations.


Image Credits: Google Images

22 comments:

  1. What a moving contribution to ABC Wednesday - thanx so much xxxx

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  2. Heartfelt piece...You wrote the words with so much soul...

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  3. love is an interesting emotion.... all heart...

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  4. it is good to grow out of that stage, the dark days, the selfish days...i was there once...and love does not flourish in the dark, like a flower it needs the light...

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  5. hmmmmm........ i really feel bad for that lady :(

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  6. Good they are gone good or bad.. and now its new day .. new life :)
    all the best

    Bikram's

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  7. Beautiful words, soulful post. Lovely :)

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  8. You are one of my favorite poet:)

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  9. Today, it gives me immense pleasure to say Saravana Kumar Murugan is back :)

    Wish you success and happiness. God bless you!

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  10. Very sad poem about a sad subject and so sorry that any female has to put up with and tolerate it.

    It was a good poem that showed us so much feeling and also to make us think.

    Great job with the Inside Theme Thursday. Thanks for playing with us. See you next week.

    God bless.

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  11. Hello.
    My heart goes out to the poor "playboy wife". She is insecure because of her husband's past. Not an ideal situation. If he loves her and wants to ensure both his & her happiness in their marriage, he need to constantly reassure her that those days are indeed over for him & she is now the only pearl of his eyes. He needs to constantly hold her in his arms, peer deeply into her eyes and tell her over & over how much he loves her. He needs to know her happiness is his responsibility & he needs to exist in her & she in him.

    Nicely done Saravana!
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate the comment.

    For ref:
    Our Candlelight Of Love

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  12. @ mrsnesbitt

    What a moving contribution to ABC Wednesday - thanx so much xxxx

    Thanks a lot.. Happy to have you here. SmileS...

    Someone is Special

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  13. @ Saru Singhal

    Heartfelt piece...You wrote the words with so much soul...

    Saru, it is great to read a sweet comment from you.. Happy Man...

    Someone is Special

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  14. @ miss pie

    love is an interesting emotion.... all heart...

    Yeah it is.. but many play with it..

    Someone is Special

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  15. @ Brian Miller

    it is good to grow out of that stage, the dark days, the selfish days...i was there once...and love does not flourish in the dark, like a flower it needs the light...

    Good you are on the right path.. Happy Brian..

    Someone is Special

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  16. @ shweta

    hmmmmm........ i really feel bad for that lady :(

    even I...

    Someone is Special

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  17. @ Bikramjit

    Good they are gone good or bad.. and now its new day .. new life :)

    Thanks my dear Bikram.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  18. @ Simran

    You are one of my favorite poet:)

    Thank you so much Little One. Happy Man...

    Someone is Special

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  19. @ Animesh Ganguly

    Today, it gives me immense pleasure to say Saravana Kumar Murugan is back :)

    Wish you success and happiness. God bless you!


    Animesh, I am really flying to read your words.. Happy happy happy...

    Someone is Special

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  20. @ Mrsupole

    Very sad poem about a sad subject and so sorry that any female has to put up with and tolerate it.

    It was a good poem that showed us so much feeling and also to make us think.

    Great job with the Inside Theme Thursday. Thanks for playing with us. See you next week.

    God bless.


    Thanks for your sweet encouraging words.. Happy...

    Someone is Special

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  21. @ Shreya

    Beautiful words, soulful post. Lovely :)

    Thanks a lot Shreya.. Glad to hear it from you.. Happy...

    Someone is Special

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  22. @ Andy

    Andy, thank you so much.. I am happy to read your sweet comments.. smiles...

    Someone is Special

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