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searching her.. in the streets of London... #1

Hello! ... Young man, are you ok? Hello…’ a good-hearted old woman tried to bring me back to this world but… her try resulted in vain so she slapped me. ‘Huhhh’ that slap brought me back to this world and my tired eyes greeted her with a ‘Hello’.

You seem to be upset with something’ she said sitting next to me but I did not utter any word. She tapped on my shoulder and said,Son, I don’t know what’s your problem is but it is not good to keep them in your heart so please share it with me’ but instead of words, I answered her with a teardrop. She helped me with her kerchief wishing that things would be ok soon. She took my dairy from my lap and as soon as she opened it, she found the reason for my sadness, so she said, ‘Who is the girl? What happened to her?’ First, I kept silent but she insisted me more to know about her. ‘Can I call you as my grandmother because you look like’, she nodded her head and once again asked me about the girl. So I….


It all started on the first day of my college life when I was praying God to bless me success in all my endeavours, and when I opened my eyes, I saw an angel standing before me in pale pink salwar kameez praying to God. Her wavy hair with a couple of strands dancing here and there in air, tiny little ears, rosy cheeks, a perfect rose bud lips generated few millilitres of hormones in me and when she opened her heart stealing eyes I lost myself in her. Is she a human being or an angel...? I was confused and really wanted someone to pinch me because I was mesmerized completely be her hypnotic eyes.

Hi. This is Hassini’, she said, ‘Hii… Hai… Sid... sorry Siddesh’ I stammered, and before I utter the next word her mom came so we smiled at each other and left the temple. But I never know I was lucky enough to be her classmate until our lunch hour, I exclaimed in happiness. Days rolled sooner than I expected and whenever we met, we exchanged smiles because our eyes conveyed the words that we have for the other.

I never know October 5th would be special but it is, as usual the day started with cool dewdrops, as I stepped out of my home to start to college. I was wearing a sky blue shirt and dark trousers. I started walking towards the bus stop and got into bus. It moved very slowly because of the ups and downs in the roads, I suddenly noticed that minute hand of my watch edged towards ‘3’ and the other just passed ‘8’. Peeping through the window, I noticed Hassini, my dream girl was riding on scooty pep. Without my knowledge, my eyes started admiring her beauty, within seconds (only for me) the bus stopped, and I got down from the bus. Entering the college, I saw Hassini was at the other end of the same pathway, so I hastened my steps with the boot sounding loud and turned left that took me nearer to her. In the meanwhile, she slowed her steps as she noticed me rushing towards her. When we met in same line, smiled at each other and I never know that, it would take another 90 seconds to cover the rest 12 meters to reach their classroom but it happened.

Because we both walked like tortoise smiling at each other, she said, 'Sid, how was your physics cycle test?' Nodding my head 'Not so bad', 'Hmmm.. So…' smiled and reading her beauty from top to bottom 'you are looking damn cute in this rose chudi', 'Hmmm... So...', smiled again and looking straight into her eyes I said, 'so.. You are blushing a lot, Hassini', 'Hmmm.. So..', I said, 'so.. I am in love with you', she was shocked to hear those words from me but her eyes revealed that she was happy to hear those words and we entered our classroom walking in unison, much like a perfect couple entering a party hall! The usual comments about ‘us’ was roaring in the air but I couldn’t hear anything because the endless charm of those most recent 90 seconds had captivated my senses and my heart was skipping beats wondering what could be her response.


'What did she respond?' the old woman said with her eyes wide opened


move on to PART 2 here...!


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30 comments:

  1. You are never at a loss for words SIS!! I'm speechless!! :D I like that tortoise walk and the choice of name ~ Hassini :) Very original!!

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  2. well well...awaiting next episode SIS..but tell me the truth, is this fiction?:P

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  3. quite interesting!
    any idea to write a novel ?
    well eager to see that to be continued part :)

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  4. right let me come back and see what she replied ..

    Bikram's

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  5. A lovely start :)
    Hmm, I'm eager to read the next part!

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  6. Yes. even i am curious to know what happened next !

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  7. A beautiful start...waiting for the next part.
    http://wehaveastory.blogspot.com/2011/10/think-about-it.html

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  8. Good start buddy :)
    I am waiting to see an update to this,

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  9. @ Nanka

    You are never at a loss for words SIS!! I'm speechless!! :D I like that tortoise walk and the choice of name ~ Hassini :) Very original!!

    Nanka, I am very very happy to hear these words from you.. Glad you like the tortoise walk, and the name Hassini.. Happy... I am now flying because I now have implemented a superb "Reply" button.. Very very happy... This is the first reply with my new comment code.. Hopefully this will rock...

    PS: I will post the next one soon..

    Someone is Special

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  10. SIS .. waiting for #2

    good start u gave..more reminded of the movie Bommarillu (spell chk needed)!!!

    regards
    rahul

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  11. Hello.
    What a romantic story of innocent love. Great imagery, especially the "tortoise walk"...that was a nice touch!
    So much intrigue at the end with that one question. Don't keep us waiting too long for the answer. ;-)

    Very nicely done, SiS!

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  12. ah enough to get us hooked...give some more...smiles.

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  13. @ Cloud Nine

    Hmm, sorry i couldn't reply to the comments.. So sweet of you and guess what this could be...

    Someone is Special

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  14. @ sowmya

    quite interesting! any idea to write a novel ? well eager to see that to be continued part :)

    sowmya, glad to have you here.. Hmm.. of course I wish to and I am.. The part two is published, hoping to see you there soon...

    Someone is Special

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  15. @ Bikramjit

    right let me come back and see what she replied ..

    so you learnt the answer Buddy?

    Someone is Special

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  16. @ Simran

    A lovely start :) Hmm, I'm eager to read the next part!

    Glad you love it little one.. Hmm.. I am sure you loved her reply..

    Someone is Special

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  17. @ RaNiiiiii

    Yes. even i am curious to know what happened next !

    Varsha, glad to have you here.. Hmm.. happy... :-)

    Someone is Specia

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  18. @ Abhisek

    A beautiful start...waiting for the next part.

    Thank you so much buddy.. Hope you like the next one too..

    Someone is Special

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  19. @ Animesh Ganguly

    Good start buddy :) I am waiting to see an update to this,

    Buddy, the update is out.. Hoping to see you right now.

    Someone is Special

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  20. @ rahul aggarwal

    Rahul, Welcome to Few Miles.. Hmm glad and yeah I need to cos I just type in my browser... No time to spell check or grammar check.. Hmm..

    Someone is Special

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  21. @ Andy

    Hello. What a romantic story of innocent love. Great imagery, especially the "tortoise walk"...that was a nice touch! So much intrigue at the end with that one question. Don't keep us waiting too long for the answer. ;-)

    Andy, Welcome to Few MileS.. Glad you love the innocent love and romance in it.. Hmm ah.. tortoise walk, very very happy :-)

    Someone is Special

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  22. @ Brian Miller

    ah enough to get us hooked...give some more...smiles.

    Well the smiles is out but it is a cliff hanger right? Hmm...

    Someone is Special

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  23. Hello Special!

    So here I am reading your story...
    Good start I must say and now going to read Part II

    One question though: Was Hassini wearing the same pink chudi on the day Sid talked to her also?

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  24. I'm sorry for landing so late here. I have bookmarked it and will read it later. A bad habit of bookmarking all the sequel posts...I feel it's like reading a book when you read them together...

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  25. very lovely opening,

    great start,

    Thanks for letting me know.

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  26. @ NRIGirl

    Hello Special!

    So here I am reading your story...
    Good start I must say and now going to read Part II

    One question though: Was Hassini wearing the same pink chudi on the day Sid talked to her also?


    NRIGirl, Welcome to Few Miles once again.. Glad to read your comment and happy to know it was good.. Hmm.. Nope she wasn't..

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  27. @ Saru Singhal

    I'm sorry for landing so late here. I have bookmarked it and will read it later. A bad habit of bookmarking all the sequel posts...I feel it's like reading a book when you read them together...

    Welcome to Few Miles Saru.. Glad you landed here and don't feel sorry for landing late.. I see myself in your comment, because that's how I do for most of the sequel's.. Hope to see you once it I completed...

    Someone is Special

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  28. @ The Cello Strings

    very lovely opening, great start, Thanks for letting me know.

    thank you so much Ji.. Hope to see you here often..

    Someone is Special

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  29. I promised myself to read a part of this sequel everyday starting today. Late at night, it gave me a wide smile. A budding love story. Though the start was sad but I loved the simplicity of words. Innocence of love at young age reflected very nicely...

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  30. @ Saru Singhal

    I promised myself to read a part of this sequel everyday starting today. Late at night, it gave me a wide smile. A budding love story. Though the start was sad but I loved the simplicity of words. Innocence of love at young age reflected very nicely...


    Saru is here to enjoy a treat.. I am happy.. Thank you thank you..

    Someone is Special

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