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April 17, 2011

~ these are few of my favourite things ~


I ran my fingers
on her forehead,
reminds me of water melon best slices
her mesmerizing eyes
so close to my eyes
reminds me of black grapes
her tiny ears
with sparkling studs
reminds me of country pears
kissing her cheeks
I brushed her with lips
reminds me of rosy pale apples
first, little kiss
on her sweet lips
reminds me of orange segments
her neck veins
that carries those lusts
reminds me of pineapples and avocados
her sweet hugs
and the warmth it brings
reminds me of those peanuts

These are a few of my favourite things

When I'm feeling sad
I gaze through the window
into the world where we lived
the darkness of the room
reminds she is no more
with tears in my red eyes
this is where it ends
though I never wished so
pain is unbearable, so

I close my eyes and simply
remember few of my favourite things





Published as a part of

Poetry Potluck @ Jingle Poetry, Theme: these are few of my favourite things

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64 comments:

  1. WHOAH! This is lovely, romantic, sweet, touching, sad but oh so romantic awwwwwwww! I'm melting cause I love it SIS, AWESOME WORK! :)

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/i-am-the-story/

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  2. So well written, SiS, and so very romanic though poignant. A fine contribution to Potluck. Thank you.

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  3. wow, a perfectly composed piece.

    very well done.
    A++

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  4. hmmm..
    That's a fruity romance!

    Hugs x

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  5. Very nice SiS...sweet romance in this.

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  6. That water-melon comparison was funny. :D

    We always think about the person who is no more or with whom we cannot be. :(

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  7. Goodness, this is edible magic! Lovely.

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  8. A gentle touch, a fresh aroma wafting by, a tender kiss felt... these things so fill our hunger for the ones we miss. Delicate reminders of that one special person, that one special moment.

    Nicely penned.

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  9. This reminds me of one of the greatest love poems of all times...the Song of Songs from the Bible (also known as the Song of Solomon)

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  10. First I was like: this is so beautiful and light feel-good poem, and then the end came and gave it a whole different feel. It's actually better that way, so thank you:)

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  11. Wow, how refreshing and sensation to include fruits into the expression.. *thumbs up*

    Here is mine for this week.. :) http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/04/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp25-it.html

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  12. Tasty ripe fruits of love make a great comparison! Well done!

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  13. So lovely and romantic. Love the comparisons.

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  14. Very Nice SiS, you have a winner in this one !!
    We have an award for you, pick it up at Dodge Writes... ENJOY
    JL&B

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  15. Aw, I wanted a happy ending, darnit! The first part was making me hungry, but the end took away my appetite. *sigh* 'Tis the sign of a well-written piece when you can evoke such things from readers!

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  16. beautifu; and sweet.. was a bit busy.. thanks for coming by my friend!

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  17. refreshing is all that i could feel after reading this! Lovely:)

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  18. I love this poem. I like the part about the orange . . . so sweet.

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  19. Wonderful! That hits the spot. So well done.

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  20. Such a tussle of emotions yet undeniably sweet in its underpinnings. Great write!

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  21. I love how you described the favorite things about your lover in comparison to fruits and then she was gone... Beautifully done, SIS!

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  22. What a beautiful and touching poem... loved it.

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  23. @ Lolamouse

    aww.. thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  24. the romantic verser is back with a sweet romance. I love the way you compared your girl with fruits and I wish the last para is result of creativity and as always I admire, love, and what more I can say for your romance. 'The Best Romantic Writer I Have Ever Read Is Someone is Special', what more can I say?

    love, bala

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  25. @ lynnaima

    Aww.. What a sweet comment is this.. Thank you so much Lynnaima..

    Someone is Special

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  26. @ JamieDedes

    Thank you Jamie for your sweet words and blessings.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  27. @ Jingle

    what more I need Ji... Thank you so much for your blessings..

    Someone is Special

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  28. she sounds very tasty...smiles...lots of good fruits...and i love avacado!

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  29. She sounds like a real peach!!

    Love the grapes for eyes imagery.

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  30. remembering is bittersweet consolation.

    so original! wonderful!

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  31. @ Olivia

    Glad to know that Olivia.. fruity.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  32. @ Reggie

    Happy to read your encouraging sweet words.. Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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  33. @ Sin

    glad you like the sweet taste.. Welcome to Few Miles.. Happy Man to have you here..

    Someone is Special

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  34. @ Nethra

    hmm you are right Nethra.. Thanks for your sweet words..

    Someone is Special

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  35. @ bendedspoon

    aww.. thanks much bendedspoon for your sweet words..

    Someone is Special

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  36. @ honeyhaiku

    Glad you love it honeyhaiku.. Thank you so much..

    Someone is Special

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  37. @ Reflections

    aww, thanks and of course those special moments are always favorite for one's heart..

    Someone is Special

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  38. @ Victoria

    Glad it reminded you one of the greatest love poems.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  39. @ Krisse

    Krisse Happy Man.. Glad you felt the essence of the poem..

    Someone is Special

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  40. @ Krislin Neo, Ting

    aww *thumbs up* so sweet of you.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  41. @ dan roberson

    thank you so much dan.. you made my day..

    Someone is Special

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  42. @ teric

    Glad you love the comparisons teric.. Thank you so much for the encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  43. @ JL Dodge

    Dodge, so sweet of you, thank you so much for the versatile blogger award.. I will showcase them soon..

    Someone is Special

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  44. @ Dragon Katet

    Welcome to Few Miles, Dragon Katet.. Glad the poem made you hungry but sorry for taking away your appetite. hmm and thanks a lot for your encouraging words.. :-)

    Someone is Special

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  45. @ fiveloaf

    fiveloaf, so sweet of you, no issues my friend.. Whenever you visit me you make me smile.. thanks for it..

    Someone is Special

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  46. @ cloud nine

    cloud nine, so sweet of you my friend.. everytime you visit me and make me happy.. thanks for all the constant support and encouragement.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  47. @ Kay

    Kay, glad you love the poem and you liked the part about orange.. so sweet of you.. thanks for your encouraging words.. SmileS..

    Someone is Special

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  48. @ Raksha Bhat

    Aww, thank you Raksha.. So sweet of you.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  49. @ kshawnedgar

    Glad to know that shawn.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  50. @ abthomas

    aww, thank you so much AB. So sweet of you..

    Someone is Special

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  51. @ bodhirose

    Gayle, glad you love the favorite things. So sweet of you..

    Someone is Special

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  52. @ sam

    Glad you love it sam.. Sweet of you.. So sweet of you..

    Someone is Special

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  53. @ bala

    Aww, bala, so sweet of you.. and of course the last para is just a result of creativity and nothing else.. hmm, you made me fly to cloud nine..

    Someone is Special

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  54. @ Mia

    thank you so much Mia.. So sweet of you..

    Someone is Special

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  55. @ Brian Miller

    Aww Brain, long time no see, of course she is.. and thanks I too love avacado..

    Someone is Special

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  56. @ Jannie Funster

    Jannie Funster, Welcome to Few Miles.. Glad you love the imagery and thanks for your encouraging words..

    Someone is Special

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  57. @ haikulovesongs

    aww, glad you said those words.. Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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  58. isn't that the best way of living life???

    remembering your fav things and life will be beautiful again :)

    you must cherish the good memories and leave those bad memories behind.. :)

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  59. @ shweta

    isn't that the best way of living life???

    remembering your fav things and life will be beautiful again :)

    you must cherish the good memories and leave those bad memories behind.. :)


    yeah it is shweta..and I love to cherish..

    Someone is Special

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