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I wished - Haiku My Heart



Mesmerizing eyes
Met them accidentally
Fell in love deeply

The Immense Love
Blew me immediately
Swept me off the floor

His gestures conveyed
It is not true love but lust
He no more needs me

Yet Cool breeze reminds
His silky touch and kisses
I treasure them most

Wave touches the shore
Echoing sweet glimps of life
Please come back to me

I wished....




PS: This is my first attempt in presenting a poem made of Haiku's... I hope it came out well...



Published as a part of

Image @ Room for Romance #6

Haiku Heights - Prompt: #17 - Silk

Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Prompt: Accident

One Single Impression - Prompt: Echoes

Poetry Potluck- Theme: Moods, Feelings and Emotions

Three Word Wednesday - gesture, immediate, treasure

Poetry Pantry at Poets United

Monday Poetry Train Revisited

One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry

recuerda mi corazon - Haiku My Heart


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96 comments:

  1. I absolutely love your haiku poem. It truly does justice to your silky smooth tale!

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  2. Very nice use of haiku to tell the story.

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  3. Good use of promots and converting them into a barrage of Haiku's :) Nice work!!

    But "Echoing sweet glimpses of life" has an extra syllable count..else it is perfect.

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  4. seriously steamy, very creative writing!

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  5. beautiful word painting..
    Thanks for sharing.

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  6. great poetry. took me back to my youth and the many encounters I had on the beaches... wonderful job!

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  7. We often mistake love for lust ... after all, the feelings are just about the same in that instance of bliss.

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  8. I enjoyed it SIS, so great. Thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  9. There's a fine line between love and lust. We sometimes don't know where one ends and the other begins because, after all, they both give wonderful feelings. This is a good reflection on those two powerful emotions!

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  10. Love the first two stanzas - thank you for sharing

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  11. Those last two words - oh, they cut deep!

    I think you did the haiku beautifully.

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  12. @ Teresa

    Glad you loved the haiku poem Teresa... Happy on hearing those wonderful words.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  13. @ Strummed Words

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  14. @ Bing (PinkLady)

    Ah.. Bing thank you so much.....

    --Someone Is Special--

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  15. @ Nanka

    Thank you so much, I have corrected it.. Hope now it is fine..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  16. @ Bloggin'withAmanda

    Glad you felt the creativity in this.. Thank you so much for those wonderful words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  17. @ lalita choudhary

    Thank you so much for those wonderful words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  18. @ fiveloaf

    Thank you so much fiveloaf...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  19. SiS,
    Lovely Haiku story...romantic, poignant and hopeful!

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  20. @ Jingle Poetry

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much Ji..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  21. @ industrialarts

    Glad to know that.. encounters, hope everything is fine.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  22. @ dasuntoucha

    Thank you so much dasuntoucha..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  23. @ ljm (Amias and Liquidplastic)

    yes it is.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  24. @ Shashi

    Glad you enjoyed it Shashi.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  25. @ The Reason You Come

    Glad to hear that.. Of course there is a line between love and lust.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  26. @ RAHUL: The Weakest Point is Love

    Thank you so much Rahul for those encouraging words.

    --Someone Is Special--

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  27. @ marousia

    Glad you loved it.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  28. @ TALON

    Glad to hear those wonderful words.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  29. @ ninotaziz

    Glad you loved it ninotaziz and felt the romance & emotions in it.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  30. *clap, clap, clap*...you did it excellently SiS!

    keep them coming... :-)

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  31. Glad to know that Amity.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  32. Oh..you needn't worry at all, SiS... your Haiku set came out very well indeed!!
    From love to sadness to hope... beautifully expressed here!! Kudos, my friend!

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  33. Intense words create striking images here. The collection of haiku to form this one longer set is wonderful!

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  34. Accidents like eyes meeting do happen but how you proceed is important.Just being swept off the feet can result in a fall so be careful and listen to the deep echoes of the wise in your inner mind :)

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  35. I really enjoyed your romantic take on the theme :O)

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  36. @ kavisionz

    Glad you hear those encouraging words kavita.. Thank you so much for the wonderful words..

    --Someone is Special--

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  37. @ Reflections

    Glad to hear those words.. Thank you so much.. It is nice to have you here..

    --Someone is Special--

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  38. @ Nanka

    of course they have to be.. Thank you so much.. Nice to have you here once again..

    --Someone is Special--

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  39. @ Madeleine

    Glad you enjoyed it... Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  40. Sis, i'm back from sensational haiku wednesday and your words continue to resonate... i could feel the deep longing here. bravo!


    Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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  41. Hello a few miles (FM) :-), i really liked your haiku. i have fallen in love with haiku myself... one of my submissions is also a set of haiku, one of my favorite types of poems actually. this is really good and the content hits home so i especially liked it! great job. the first verse of the second stanza has 4 syllables instead of 5. it was funny because as soon as i started reading your poem i thought. HEY this is haiku, it had that feel and it was really great. wonderful piece. i don't usually add a link but since we both had similar types of posts, here's my multi stanza haiku: http://700miles.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/addictive-flow/

    the closest thing i have gotten to a true haiku(there are so many rules) might be this one: http://700miles.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/ponderings/

    ah ok. i'll stop rambling...

    oh and like the similar names too. :-) take care...keep writing!!! ~700miles

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  42. love the combination of Haiku!

    Bravo!!!

    :)

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  43. Lovely set of Haiku this is perfect for Haiku Wednesday!

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  44. Oh yes, you succeeded, SiS.
    Very well. Victoria

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  45. Holy cow! I've never seen anyone tie-in one submission with so many sites!

    You've got this linked to NINE different places!

    (Talk about multi-tasking!)

    Anyways, nice use of a series of haiku as an overall poetic form.

    Very sensual One Shot, SIS!

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  46. Solid, spare-word-effective "lust = nature" work.

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  47. I don´t know what Haiku is... but I loved the poem! Very sensual and emotionsal... very tangible!

    :)

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  48. thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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  49. Very nice use of words - great haiku story! Well done!

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  50. Dear SIS
    I enjoyed seeing this one again through One Shot..


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  51. @ Bing (PinkLady)

    Glad to have you once again Bing. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  52. @ 700miles

    700miles, First of all, it is nice to have you here. Even I fallen in haiku impressed by one the best in the world Leo, and this is my first attempt in delivering Haiku as a poem. Thanks for the wonderful words, sure will stop by yours to enjoy the Haiku.. Thanks once again for all those wonderful wishes.

    --Someone is Special--

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  53. @ Gabriela Abalo

    Glad to know that Gabriela Abalo, Thank you so much for the wonderful words.

    --Someone is Special--

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  54. @ Bloggin'withAmanda

    Gladly Amanda.. Thank you so much for the wonderful words..

    --Someone is Special--

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  55. @ Victoria

    Thank you so much Victoria.. Happy to hear those words from you Thanks once again..

    --Someone is Special--

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  56. @ Eric Alder

    Glad to know that Eric, the words made me easy to tie-in for everything. Love to multitask as a software engineer professionally, glad i did it here. Nice to have your wonderful words and you here.

    --Someone is Special--

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  57. @ Steve

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much.

    --Someone is Special--

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  58. @ Lu Ann

    Glad you loved it, thanks for feeling the emotions in this.
    PS: Haiku is a three line non-rhyming japanese poem, the form is 5--7--5 Syallable structure. Once you learn this you love this as I did. Thanks to Leo for inspiring me with his wonderful Haiku's

    --Someone is Special--

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  59. @ Jingle

    Thank you so much Ji.. Glad to know that, sure will come and collect them, i will showcase all the awards by decemeber first as I living a hectic month..

    --Someone is Special--

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  60. @ Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?

    Glad to know that Jenn, you are a super dooper blogger who appreciates all the hard work done.

    --Someone is Special--

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  61. @ Shashi

    It was nice to have you here Shashi, I will be happy to know your wonderful thoughts on my novel too. You are of special kind, sure.

    --Someone is Special--

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  62. I came here via Haiku My Heart. YOu have a lot going on. Can't say I'll get to everything, yet I'd like to try, what I've seen is pleasing to the eye and the poetry via haiku provokes so many thoughts, scenarios and emotions, all good.

    Peace.

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  63. Very well done! I enjoyed the imagery of the poetry! Thank you! Cathy

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  64. BRAVO! This is a beautiful piece of writing...ENCORE...I want more!

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  65. Wow, such a busy lady but you still have time for romance ! Love your words of love and passion.
    Havea joyous Friday !

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  66. Beautifully done... poignant and wistful.

    Deb

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  67. Wonderfully constructed. Thanks for joining in Haiku my Heart.

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  68. love the string of 'kuz... and love and romance all day and all night long... absolutely!!!...

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  69. Really lovely poem. I never considered writing a story with haiku.

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  70. Interesting collection, and a great photo. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  71. love first the shadowy photo...
    which invites anyone to place themselves in this moment of reflection.
    the your words...
    an entire love story
    offered in haiku.
    amazing, truly.

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  72. brilliant,
    you have a Haiku poem,

    I am late for silk entry,
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/20/fluffy-clouds-float-high/

    Thanks for reading.

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  73. SIS, just loved your Haiku. Such lovely words and images. This is great.

    Melanie

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  74. @ gautami tripathy

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  75. @ Spadoman

    Glad to know that Spadoman.. I am happy that you wanted to give a try on everything.. Will wait for your thoughtful feedback.. Thank you so much for those wonderful words.

    --Someone is Special--

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  76. @ GrandmaK

    Glad to know that Cathy.. Thanks for enjoying it..

    --Someone is Special--

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  77. @ deb did it

    You made me fly deb.. Thanks for those wonderful encouraging words.. Sure I will give more of this kind..

    --Someone is Special--

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  78. @ Kim Mailhot

    Welcome to Few Miles! Thanks for your wonderful words. Someone is Special always love to romance with his pen... Wish you a very happy week.. I know i'm late sorry for that..

    --Someone is Special--

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  79. @ paper-n-soul

    Glad to know that you felt the beauty in this.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  80. @ Meri

    Thanks for the welcome.. I love to link in HMH.. Happy Man..

    --Someone is Special--

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  81. @ ms pie

    Gladly ms pie .. Thanks a ton for those wonderful words..

    --Someone is Special--

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  82. @ Terena

    Glad you loved it Terena.. Thank you so much, even I didn't, this is my first attempt, hope it came out well..

    --Someone is Special--

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  83. @ Boonie S

    Glad to know that Boonie S .. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  84. @ rebecca

    Glad you loved it rebecca.. Yes this is my first try in haiku as a story.. Happy to know that the photo was liked by everyone.. Thank you so much.. Happy to link in for Haiku my Heart..

    --Someone is Special--

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  85. @ Jingle

    Glad to know that Ji.. Thank you so much for those words... I just read yours, it was wonderful..

    --Someone is Special--

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  86. @ Cassiopeia Rises

    Glad you loved the Haiku's Cassiopeia Rises.. Happy on reading your feedback.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone is Special--

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  87. Aww.. what a poem? the best one I ever read.Romantic Verser at your best.

    What i love is the way she met the eyes, fell with them love, falling for him, once he leaves her, she feels her touched and the last line made it perfect.

    You are a perfect Romantic Verser.

    love, bala.

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  88. @ bala

    Thanks man for the wonderful words of encouragement.. This is the most appreciation I have ever got.. Thanks once again..

    --Someone is Special--

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  89. Interesting text. You have a nice blog. Keep it up!

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  90. @ Salini

    Welcome to Few Miles.. thank you so much for your sweet words.. Do keep coming..

    Someone is Special

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