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Waited Love





The Long waited love kills me from the start
Moistened the eyes much worse than the red sea
Effects of blues to the highest degree
Solemn silence wounded my little heart
Waves broke the silence of my waited heart
And the pain of the waited love in me
Ray of hope came shimmering towards me
As the waves reflected her as fine art


I went on my knee to rhyme my love
For the sweet love, I love to give my soul
To my twin soul as a token of love
I took her hand to propose without stroll
And wished to accept my love with a kiss
Gives me immense pleasure with thy bliss





The Sonnet, I am penning down this form of poetry for the first time. I hope it rhymes as per the form and sounds romantically. I thank Amity and Liliana Negoi for the inspiration that made me to pen down this Sonnet.




The Sonnet Form:


The eight-line stanza, called an octave, uses two rhyme words. The first line rhymes with the fourth, fifth, and eighth lines; the second with the third, sixth, and seventh. (abba abba)

In the six-line finale (the sestet), can be of any one of this forms. Either abcabc, ababab or, if you want to summarize in last two lines, ababcc.





Published as a part of

Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry, Theme: Romance and Love

Poetry Pantry at Poets United

Room for Romance #4

Blue Monday at Smiling Sally

Monday Poetry Train Revisited

Three Word Wednesday - Effects, shimmer, immense

One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry



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48 comments:

  1. this could be a great inspiration for me to write for room of romance #4 plus poetry potluck...

    love the imagery,
    so romantic and magical...

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  2. you've done such a fine job with that sonnet :) and there isn't really much to thank me for - your talent says it all

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  3. "Gives me immense pleasure" to read this! Lovely!

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  4. wonderful sonnet =D love is flowing in and out!^^

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  5. first sonnet...and you did wonderfully....

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  6. bravo, SiS!!! this is quite impressive! i am a great believer of twin souls. what a romantic piece!

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  7. What talented person you are. You did an great job on this sonnet, and have a nice way with words.

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  8. You're a skilled romantic!


    Happy Blue Monday!

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  9. @ Jingle

    Gladly.. Thank you so much for your encouraging and sweet words Ji.. You always make me smile...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  10. @ Liliana Negoi

    Glad to know that... Thank you so much for those sweet words

    --Someone Is Special--

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  11. @ scentofmyheart

    Gladly... Thank you so much for those sweet words

    --Someone Is Special--

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  12. @ device independent mobility

    That is sad to know but at the end when we attain the pleasure moment, that could vanish all the pains... Thank you so much...l.

    --Someone Is Special--

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  13. @ RiikaInfinityy

    Aww Riika Thank you so much dear..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  14. @ Brian Miller

    Brian, glad to know that.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  15. @ Bing (PinkLady)

    Glad you experienced the romance in this.. Thank you so much Bing..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  16. @ LV

    Aww..Thank you so much for those encouraging words.. Made me fly..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  17. @ SmilingSally

    Aww. You made me fly to romantic Cloud 9.. Thank you so much and Happy Blue Monday..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  18. "As the waves reflected her as fine art" - Wow! Very romantic piece

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  19. I'm not a big fan of strictly-followed forms, but I admire what it takes to do so well. Nice job!

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  20. romance personified! I enjoyed this very much!

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  21. Someone is Special,

    Glad I have discovered your blog.
    This sonnet was a delight to read. So loving and full of true romance.

    Best wishes, Eileen

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  22. Nicely done
    Great romance and beautifully expressed.

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  23. I really felt the romance in this sonnet. Nice job.

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  24. Lovely sonnet; I enjoyed reading about the form as well. SO romantic!

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  25. @ fiveloaf

    Gladly fiveloaf.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  26. @ ana

    Happy to hear those.. Of course I love to romance with my pen a lot.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  27. @ Eric Alder

    Thank you so much for your sweet words.. I am just starting to follow those strict forms..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  28. @ Bloggin'withAmanda

    Glad you enjoyed it.. I love to romance with my pen through words.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  29. @ Eileen T O'Neill

    Welcome to Few Miles! Glad to have you here.. Happy to hear those wonderful words.. I love to romance with my pen through words.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  30. @ drmadangoyal

    Glad to have you here.. I love to romance with my pen through words.. Happy to hear those encouraging words... Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  31. @ ThomG

    Glad to have you here.. I love to romance with my pen through words.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  32. @ Christine

    Glad you loved it.. I love to share my learnings... I love to romance with my pen through words.. Thank you so much for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  33. very beautifl poem, SiS.. good one for the Potluck Theme!

    My Potluck Is Here

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  34. I just took a crack at my first sonnet as well! Much more difficult than I anticipated. Nice One Shot!

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  35. This is nice SIS, I enjoyed reading it... thanks for sharing.


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  36. Great Petrarchan Sonnet! ;)

    Thanks for sharing!

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  37. This was so tender and so touching...beautiful.

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  38. @ Leo

    Seeing your name in my comments section makes me happy and with such wonderful words make me fly man... Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  39. @ D.C. Lutz

    Welcome to few Miles! Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  40. @ Gabriela Abalo

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much Gabriela Abalo

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  41. @ Shashi

    Glad you felt it nice.. Thanks for enjoying it and for your sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  42. @ Mona

    Thank you so much.. Happy to hear those..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  43. @ TALON

    Gladly.. Thank you so much for those wonderful beautiful words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  44. Intense, yet emotionally removed in its convoluted language/structure. Good stuff, distinctive tone.

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  45. @ Steve

    Glad to know that.. Thank you so much..

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