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#98 Rhyming Waters


On a pleasant evening with the moon,
I rhymed waters for you to reach soon!
With the birds singing the song,
I rhymed waters with you along!

Trees danced with the gentle breeze,
I rhymed waters for time to freeze!
With plectrum striking the guitar strings,
I rhymed waters with your lips!

Tuning the scales with the pegs,
I rhymed waters for thy bliss!
With the heavy love watering the soul,
I rhymed waters for my twin soul!



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66 comments:

  1. Beautifully written dear.

    My fav line "I rhymed waters... "

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  2. This is as sweet as it could be- beautiful rhyming of words.. almost felt like a dream.. The purple Image- I loved it- you know well- just why.. :D
    Reading you is always a delight. I kind of lose my self reading your words..
    "With plectrum striking the guitar strings,
    I rhymed waters with your lips!"
    My heart had skipped a beat if not two..

    Happy Rally
    My entry:
    http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/678/

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  3. i like the rhyming water that a cool pairing..so you are hitting 100 posts? congrats!

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  4. perfect rhymes and rhythms,
    this piece is very extraordinary.
    love the beauty in both words and image.

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  5. Happy 100th post ...
    Glad to see you grow and do such an amazing job along the way.
    Thanks for the participation!

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  6. @ Zainab

    Thank you so much and I am happy to know that you loved it dear...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  7. @ oliviasbiopiclog

    Thank you so much Olivia, you made my day with such beautiful encouraging words. Happy man to know that you loved and glad to know that it skipped a beat or two..
    You made my day.. Thanks surely will visit you..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  8. @ Brian

    Thank you so much Brian, with blessing from people like you i love to write more and more..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  9. @ Jingle

    I am happy to know that you loved the piece... Thank you so much Ji.. Happy to hear those from you..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  10. this write is mystic..
    as a musician I am in love with the picture and thought.
    beautifully written

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  11. @ Jingle

    Ji, I am really happy to hear those from you. After Leo and you visited my blog, I started to grow more and explore more.
    I still remember the first award you gave me on Friendship Day, thank you so much Ji.. Always happy to participate and This is a series of poem which explians love from first waters, thirsty waters, sweetned waters and thirsty waters and it goes on..
    I specially love to put these for Thursday Poets Rally.
    Thank you Ji!!!!

    --Someone Is Special--

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  12. @ woih

    I am happy to hear those sweet words from you.. Thank you so much for your encouragign words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  13. Rhyming words and sweet poetry of wait... liked it so much... thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay for a verse everyday about love, longing and life

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  14. well penned...
    //I rhymed waters for time to freeze!//
    loved this line... its so beautiful and tgoughful...
    nice write..

    http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/09/souvenir.html

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  15. Lovely sentiment, precious in every way!

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  16. I saw many ! exclamation marks which allow me to see that it is in fact a very happy and emotional poem! It made me smile, very nice :)

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  17. Loved the imagery of the guitar and plectrum.

    Great poem :)

    Kiera x

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  18. @ Shashi

    Thank you so much Shashi.. Happy to hear those from you...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  19. @ Rajlakshmi

    Thank you so much Rajlakshmi.. You made me touch Cloud 9.. Thank you...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  20. @ Kristen Haskell

    Thank you so much Kristen Haskell and also for being regular.. Do keep coming and make me happy with your thoughts on my post..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  21. @ Thoughts Not Lost

    Oh Someone Is Special, please come back to earth... Cloud 9 after reading this.. I love your comment so so much.. Thank you so much for loving it..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  22. @ Lu Ann

    Thank you so much Lu Ann.. I was happy when I penned down.. and always wanted to be..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  23. @ kieraville

    Thank you so much kieraville for those sweet words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  24. So soothing and lovely. Thanks for your gift of sharing.

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  25. That picture is amazing and the last two lines of the poem blew me away. Can I know how the picture was created? If so email me at the email my goggle gives. :) River
    adventures in poesy

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  26. @ penelopephoebe

    Welcome to Few Miles! Happy to know that you loved it.. Thank you so much..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  27. @ River

    Welcome to Few Miles! I am one again on Cloud 9. Thank you so much. About the picture, I just got it from my frend. It impressed me so much and it was apt for my poem so used it.. Thanks for the sweet visit, do be regular...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  28. This is beautiful and flowing like the rhyming waters...I love the image... is that you? Congratulations on your 100 posts and thanks for coming to my blog ,so I could connect here with you as well. :) heartspell

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  29. @ heartspell

    Oh so sweet of you heartspell... I am still hanging on cloud 9.. So sweet of you.. No it is not me.. But I have similar kind of photo.. I love to play guitar and enjoy that..

    Thank you so much for your wishes on 100 posts.. Thank you once again..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  30. These words, the images, the rhythm and rhymes are delightful.

    Happy Rally!!

    (and thank you for the comment on my blog!)

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  31. been so long since i tried to rhyme.

    =] goodjob.

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  32. Captivating right from the title--and with the rhythm, and the rhyme, and beautiful descriptions you give to us, that captivation never falters. Beautiful work.

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  33. The image is so beautifully reflected in the poem or vice versa!
    I could happily hang this on my bedroom wall to read daily...Bravo!

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  34. Hi,

    Nice rhymes you got there. I've been practicing my rhymes because I suck at it. I admire people like you who can write nice poems and still rhyme!

    ~D

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  35. Lovely poem. Liked the imagery you have created.

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  36. Lovely poem. Liked the imagery you have created.

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  37. Congratulations on your 100th post! Your poem here is great, so upbeat and it fits the picture perfectly. Nicely written!

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  38. That's a cool pic, and a nifty idea,
    my friend -- thought specialist ;)
    And congratulations, too!

    Peace, Uncle Tree

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  39. wow, what a lovely poem! i believe in twin souls so this was truly romantic.

    thanks for the lovely comment you left at my blog. :)

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  40. Beautifully musical - very sweet.

    Deborah

    http://deborahhorton.wordpress.com/2010/09/23/journey/

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  41. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html

    Hello, friend:

    Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
    Thanks in advance.
    Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…

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  42. @ Julie Jordan Scott

    Aww! Thank you so much for your delightful words and happy to know that you liked it..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  43. @ kyogakura

    Thank you so much for your wishes.. read more and write more you can rhyme..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  44. @ Chris G.

    Thank you so much Chris for those words.. I am cloud 9.. happy to hear those from you..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  45. @ Bikramjit

    Thank you so much Bikramjit for those encouraging words.. I am glad to know that you loved it..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  46. @ Harshika

    Happy Man.. Happy to hear that you loved it..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  47. @ sillyfrogsusan

    Someone Is Special, where are you says sillyfrogsusan.
    SiS: I am cloud 9 Bhaiya..

    You made my day.. 12 hours of stupid work before the sytem and after reading this.. I am happy and love to pen down more..

    This is most wonderful comment I have received so far.. Happy Man... :-) :-) :-)

    --Someone Is Special--

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  48. @ D

    still in cloud 9.. People thank you so much for the love.. I am very happy...

    --Someone Is Special--

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  49. @ cerridwyntiponi

    Wow once again.. Thank you so so much.. I am the happiest man in this world..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  50. @ frayedges

    Thank you so much for those wonderful encouraging words.. Loved to say HAppy Monday..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  51. @ Uncle Tree

    Thank you so much.. Happy Man to read all these wonderful comments after a horrible 12 hours of work.. IT s****..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  52. @ Bing

    Thank you so much.. Happy Man.. I totally surrender myself in twin souls..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  53. @ Deborah

    Thank you so much Deborah for your recent constant support.. Happy Man.. Glad to know that you felt it sweet..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  54. @ Ramen

    Thank you so much Ramen for those encouraging words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  55. @ Olivia

    Hi Dear Frend.. Thank you so much for the invite.. I always love to be there.. But for the past three days.. I am stuck up with lots of works..
    As you know IT.. It is tough.. I will take a off for this week and will come back with a bang next weekk.. Happy Monday..
    Once again thanks for your wishes..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  56. @ all

    Thank you so much for your love.. You all made my day.. It was worst 12 hours but smiling now from my heart.. Thanks for that..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  57. 'I rhymed waters for time to freeze!'

    - what a great line because it teased my imagination! The whole poem painted such lovely imagery.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Donusho.

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  58. @ Donusho

    Wow you made my day with such sweet words.. Thanks a lot for you encouraging words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  59. You have well rhymed the feelings with water.

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  60. @ Jagdish

    Thanks for all the sweet smiles.. You are so nice to me, reading all the posts that I FAV in BJ... Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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  61. @ sajeevkmenon

    a beautiful melody of love:) aww.. melody.. I am flying.. thank you so much for your constant

    support and encouragement..

    Someone is Special

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