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Goodbye


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 13; the thirteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Ajay!” shouted Neha all of a sudden in grave voice. Tracing the scream of his sweetheart Ajay came rushing to her. He looked anxiously at her waiting to hear what had happened. Those worried, yet calm eyes of hers conveyed that she was parting. But he couldn’t see anything beyond his imagination; as he was blind from his birth. All he heard was a feeble voice, “Ajay... Ajay... I love you... Good... Bye...” Literally unconscious of the reality, he yelled out for help to save her. With a lot of struggle, he managed to get her to the hospital. The news of her Brain Dead Condition came thundering down his heart. He was consumed by grief, when he heard someone shouting for his name. “Do you know Mr. Ajay? Neha has expressed her will that her eyes be given to Ajay, a year before.” Hearing this, Ajay broke into tears and pleaded with the doctor to transplant Neha’s heart too to him. They took a sample test for blood group matching and predicted that the Neha’s Heart will match him.


The footprints on the beach sand were very vivid and illustrative of the path Ajay had travelled to “see” them on the photo that he once took when he and Neha were at the beach. Neha’s heart is now beating for him as her eyes pictured for him the scenes of her last times. He drank a sip of her favourite capuchino and he closed his eyes, that silently reassured him that true love never dies and the last word uttered by her kept on ringing in his mind, “Goodbye

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  • I had penned down this story based on a real life experience that happened to my friend Ajay and Neha. The image in this post is not the original one. I am dedicating this post to Neha as she still lives in our heart. Not everyone can be Neha and Ajay. “True Love Never Dies
  • Leo, PS I had considered your suggestion and spelled Friend as Friend.
  • This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-ton, Thursday Tales (Image: Footsteps), Three Word Wednesday (drink, feeble, predict).
  • Special Thanks to Debosmita for suggesting a topic that gave me an opportunity to pen down this and for “What If” as that was the topic that I first penned down for Blog-a-ton.

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76 comments:

  1. Poignant! Ajay was blind? That was not clear in the beginning

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  2. @Ritu
    Hmmm.. Yeah he was Blind from his birth.. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  3. Hmmm.. I am at loss of words now

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  4. Very touching and heartfelt.

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  5. @Guddu
    I am happy that you felt the pain.. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  6. @Vivek
    I am happy that felt it touchy... Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  7. Nice narration,but the end left me craving for more details.
    All the best! :)

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  8. @Rinaya
    Hmm I promised him not to reveal any of his personal things. Thanks a ton for visiting my blog and do keep visiting..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  9. very touchy narration Saravana, a poignant tale..!

    ATB for Blog-a-Ton 13 dude! :)

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  10. @Leo
    I am glad you loved it, thanks a ton.. Wish you the same..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  11. really nice tale,touching one.heard first of this kind.
    I wish they had lived together.

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  12. @Anurag
    Thanks for your wonderful words of encouragement, your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles Frequently, thanks a ton..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  13. Love the idea of Neha donating her eyes to the blind Ajay.
    Very touching...

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  14. @Rumya
    I am happy that the story touched your heart, thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do be regular on my updates.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  15. @Shruthi
    I am happy that you like it a lot. Thanks a ton for the wishes, for stopping for Few Miles and do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  16. That was a heart felt story, man. Well written. All the best!

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  17. This story is so touching especially since it is a true story of the presence of mind of a friend to donate her eyes to the person she loved the most...all the best :))

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  18. @Karthik
    I am happy that you felt the story.. Thanks for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles. do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  19. @pushpee
    I am very happy that you like Neha's wish. Thanks a ton for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles. Do keep coming..

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    Someone Is Special

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  20. thank u for the search & link Saravana, but i've my posts and comments with me still, at Wordpress.. :)

    i'll try to settle in over there..! Do keep visiting..!

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  21. @Leo
    Sure I will, but my frequency will be less as I don't have access to Wordpress blogs from my company.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  22. What a beautiful story...it is certainly a testament of love. Lovely writing here.

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  23. @The Write Girl
    I am happy that you loved the story, Thanks a ton for coming back to Few Miles, do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  24. Very touching and what was more moving about it is that you said it was a true story :(
    Good luck for BATOM! :)

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  25. short and well narrated!

    best wishes for BAT!

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  26. @evanescentthoughts
    I am happy that you felt it, thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles and also for your wishes. Do keep coming.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  27. @magiceye
    Thanks for your wishes and also for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  28. Thank you for stopping by my blog and showing me a way to your wonderful blog :D

    It was a wonderfully written beautiful story that brought out the warmth of true love in a very different perspective :)

    The fact that it is a true story adds all the more charm to this touching tale :)

    Keep up the good work and best wishes for BAT :)

    Cheers!!

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  29. Nowadays I don't blog much so don't read regularly but will try to keep up as much as possible.

    By the way, nice story. :)

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  30. hi! quite a touching story. nice and simple narration. i like it. all the best for BAT.

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  31. @dialoguewithyou
    I am happy after reading your comment. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles, for your wishes and also for wonderful and encouraging words. Do keep coming..

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    Someone Is Special

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  32. @Nethra
    Thanks for visiting, for your few words of encouragement and do keep coming..

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    Someone Is Special

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  33. @A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart!
    Thanks for stopping by Few Miles and also for your wonderful words of encouragement and wishes. Do keep coming and enjoy my travel in the world of blog...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  34. Oh my god. This is really unbelievable. Seeing the life through the eyes of someone he loved and living this life through her heartbeats. Truely there is no goodbyes for true love. I feel for that guy. May god bless him.

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  35. @Jayanta Deka
    Thanks for stopping by Few Miles, I hope you enjoyed the stay do keep coming...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  36. @Nithin R S
    Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, for your wishes to Ajay and also for your encouraging words..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  37. Beautifully narrated touchy story. It's like two lovers mingle into one physically and spiritually. Awesome stuff !!

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  38. @binzy
    I am happy that liked it a lot. Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming to feed me with your thoughts..

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    Someone Is Special

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  39. It was beautiful....i am sorry for your friend...honestly i am touched and pray that ajay lives a gr8 life

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  40. @Shahid Mukadam a.k.a Shady West Side
    Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, for the wishes to Ajay and also I am happy that the story touched your heart.
    Do keep coming.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  41. @Nitty
    I am happy that you felt the story touching your heart. Thanks for stopping by Few Miles. Do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  42. wow dis ws tru eh...gud to knoe tht such gud pple exist even 2day...nice post der

    -Devilzangel
    http://collected-cryptics.blogspot.com

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  43. @devilzangel
    Thanks for stopping by Few Miles and do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  44. Liked it very much...especially, since u did justice to it!

    All the best for BAT!!!

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  45. A very well written story. The notion that its a true story makes it more heart touching. I wanted to read more of it as I liked it a lot.

    Best of luck! =)

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  46. @mayur
    I am glad to know that you liked it very much, thanks for stopping by Few Miles. do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  47. @R Zaib
    I am happy to know that you felt heart touching..Welcome to Few Miles, thanks a ton do keep coming...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  48. @gkam
    I am happy to know that you felt the story... Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  49. drama in real life... best of luck to you and to ajay

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  50. @Worthless Rantings
    Welcome to Few Miles. Thanks for stopping by and also for your wonderful words on my blog. Do keep visiting..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  51. @ Saravana

    I loved the whole narration...but more than that I'm so touched with your sincere efforts behind the post!

    The love the affections defintely reflects back so well in those simple lines!

    I loved the simplicity of emotion and dare to beleive in Goodbye is never forever!

    Bow to U great work/word


    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  52. thats a touching story narrated not only with words but with emotions. excellent piece of writing. Not every Ajay is lucky enough to have a Neha like this!!

    ~Vee...

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  53. Really moving. To see the world through the eyes of the one you love, that's what happened to Ajay, except it happened quite literally. Good luck.

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  54. @Nitty
    I am happy that it touched your heart. Thanks a ton

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  55. @Rachana
    You made my day with your wonderful words. I am blessed with frends like you in blogging network.

    I am happy that it touched your heart and you felt the reflection and the affection between them.

    Do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  56. @Vee
    Welcome to Few Miles. I am happy to know that you felt the story and more than that, "Not every Ajay is lucky enough to have a Neha like this", Billion percent true..

    Do keep coming and enjoy your stay here..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  57. @Dreamer
    Welcome to Few Miles, I am happy that you loved the story.. Do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  58. Hi,

    That was very well narrated ..story ..really hats off to you ..

    It heart touching..keep it up ..

    sometime things do happens ..it not in our hands..

    ATB for BAT

    Take care.
    Ks:)

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  59. @vivek
    Welcome Back to Few Miles. I am very glad to know that you loved the story, narration and it touched your heart.

    Thanks a ton for stopping by Few Miles, do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  60. I liked the part about her favourite cappuccino. I just felt you could have made clear to the reader that Ajay was blind in the first place.

    All the best!

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  61. @ Keerthi P
    Welcome to Few Miles, I don't wanna reveal at first, actually i thought of telling at the last line but later felt it is not a great idea so revealed it in the accident phase.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  62. Hi Saravana.. tht was a poignant post.. keep participating in BAT!!!

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  63. @ Vipul Grover
    Welcome back to Few Miles !
    I am happy that you felt it touched. Will do my best in participating BAT, and atleast once I should win in BAT, waiting for that day...

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  64. A moving tale from real life. Good one!
    All the best for BAT-13!
    Cheers :)

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  65. @ Shilpa Garg
    Welcome back to Few Miles!
    I am glad to know that you felt it touched and moving.. Thanks a ton for stopping by. Cheers :-)

    Happy Independence Day !

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  66. This story reminded me of "the Gift of the Magi" though I think this one has its uniqueness. Faith is all that is needed, once we begin to love.
    All the best!

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  67. @ Hiyaa
    Thanks a lot Hiyaa for your kind and encouraging words. Do keep coming..

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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  68. Sad. Lovely. Heart-warming and heart-rending. Completely engaging, SIS. Thank you! And a fine homage to a friends.

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  69. @ Jamie

    SmileS, he is one of my best friend.. With wishes from people like you he will do better..

    Someone is Special

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  70. @ Rajendra Raikwar

    I will surely come back For more.

    Glad to know that.. Thanks..!

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