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'First Waters' poem published in February 2011 issue of Cynic Online Magazine.


Silently, I waited; I searched for the signs.
I looked all around for myself different from me.

The lavender rays glittering in the air,
Of which the dandelion sun had no share!

The sweetness of time, gone without notice.
All because of the treasure I cannot miss!

The senses submitted themselves to a superior sense,
That rose above and name itself 'Love'.

But the waters are new and the feet are weak.
What if I slipped and got myself drowned?

The light of hope accompanied the thirst;
The fear became an imagination, forgotten first.

Will the light lead me to the sun?
Or blind me with its overpowering force?

I step into the waters trusting the light,
That broke the silence of my searching eyes.



To read the next two parts of this poem, please visit the following posts, Thirsty Waters & Sweetened Waters.


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25 comments:

  1. Love can definitely be scary to fall into....

    Lovely poem!

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  2. great....
    Thanks for tagging properly..

    your work is always enjoyable...
    unbeatable flow.

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  3. @ TALON

    Thank you so much, this was my first thought in Few Miles..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  4. @ Jingle

    Thanks for providing a platform.. Thank you so much Ji..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  5. This is beautiful. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender

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  6. @ Sender

    Thank you so much.. It continues..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  7. I'm sure your work will garner you plenty of readers.

    (Here's a tip: If you read and comment on other blogs, you'll find most of them return the favor)

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  8. ah i feel the fear yet know it continues so i will follow the stream...smiles.

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  9. this is beautiful and I love the last two lines! So nice!
    Pamela

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  10. Powerful. Love, loved, loved the last two lines of this poem.

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  11. Awesome!! I always like reading poems and stories that end with positivity and hope...
    Excellent poem,Someone!!
    Thank you for participating in the poetry potluck, and for linking this poem to it! It's lovely !! A real treat to the reader's senses!

    And you are right about Jingle!! Many of us unread poets have gained recognition cuz of her...she rocks!!

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  12. "The senses submitted themselves to a superior sense"
    beautiful....
    loved the use of metaphors..
    And I totally agree with you about Jingle. She is one amazing lady :)

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  13. @ Eric Alder

    Welcome back.
    Thank you so much for your encouraging words and wishes.. This is my first post in this blog.
    I am following this technique for the past three months and now I am able to get good readership.. Thanks once again Eric..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  14. @ Brain Miller

    Thank you so much for your encouraging words..
    Happy Poetry Potluck..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  15. @ flaubert

    Thank you so much for your sweet encouraging words..
    Happy Poetry Potluck..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  16. @ Thoughts Not Lost

    Welcome to Few Miles!
    Thank you so much for your wonderful encouraging words..
    Happy Poetry Potluck..


    --Someone Is Special--

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  17. @ Kavita

    Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words..
    You made my day with so sweet words...
    Happy Poetry Potluck..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  18. @ Alethea

    Welcome to Few Miles!
    Thank you so much for those sweet encouraging words..
    Yeah yeah, Jingl is great lady :-)
    Happy Poetry Potluck..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  19. @ fiveloaf

    Thank you so much for your encouraging words..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  20. nice..... and keep going and i am also a person in your friends list

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  21. @ sikandhar ali

    nice..... and keep going and i am also a person in your friends list

    Welcome to Few Miles! and thanks for your comment...

    Someone is Special

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